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Sentence 10:Many of our local businesses are already struggling to survive, this plan may put those places out of business altogether.
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Sentence We will be hosting the next workshop on thursday, October 15.
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Sentence 1Finally, you should definitely call a day or too before the move and confirm the date and time.
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Sentence 9:You never needs to leave the office or house!
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Sentences 1 and I use your offices at 14 Wall St.three or four days a week.I use both during office hours and after office hours.
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Sentence We want to help you taking care of all of your automotive needs.
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Sentence 9:A lump sum repayment by check or money order.
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Sentence Impressed was I, when Elena first came to Ryan Industries, with her ability to learn the job quickly.
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When Elena first came to Ryan Industries,
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Sentence 1Facilitators at our two sessions are human resources experts they have logged many hours with Fortune 500 firms.
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Sentence 10:The task of the Everest cleanup is a huge one that require the cooperation of all involved.
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Sentence Twin Treasures Resort is like no other hotel, in the world.
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Sentence The lives of many have gotten to the point where they feel as if they are participating in a marathon, their days are crammed with a whirlwind of activities.
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Sentence 10:Aggressive and impatient driving have a price at the gas pump.
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Sentence 1Family and social obligations became burdensome.
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Sentence 6:In addition, I have took a number of manufacturing-related courses, including collective bargaining, labor problems, and research methods.
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Sentence 1Unwind in the Jacuzzi® and sauna, or allow yourself to be pampered with a professional massage.
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Sentence 10:Once the larger kindling caught, close the door, but don’t tighten the seal.
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Sentence 1You can see that Van Gogh were highly successful in engaging the viewer in emotional and beautiful works of art.
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Sentence 8:When I request a slip, he often tells me that I don’t need one because he knows me, as I leave, he then asks me for one and requests my identification card.
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Sentence 16:Automatically being a member enrolls you in our apprentice program.
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Sentences 15 and 16:Please reconsider your position.Support those of us who want to keep our town quiet and local merchants in business.
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Sentence 1You may arrive at your destination a few minutes later then the speedsters.
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Sentence I do not wish to accuse anyone and am only concerned with improving conditions so we works as a team to meet deadlines.
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Sentence She proved to be a diligent worker a team player, and a trusted friend.
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Sentence 20:If we continue to receive complaints regarding inappropriate workstation behavior, management, will have to find a better means of controlling the situation.
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Sentence 1Silver Wing, our super rush service, guarantees that your materials are pact and delivered in less than an hour.
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Sentence 1Organic fertilizers last the whole year and prevented the growth on which bugs feed.
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Sentence 18:At this time, we are issuing a few suggestions helping to solve our problems.
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Sentence 1Now, still leaving power-draining accessories turned off take your vehicle out for a good drive on the highway to recharge your battery fully.
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Sentence 7:Many times when I sign in after hours, fails he does to give me a pass slip that I need to use when I leave the building.
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Sentence 6:Over the past ten years, our volunteers had been traveling to the elementary schools and high schools in Montgomery.
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Sentence 9:Tantalize your taste buds with fine food and a selection from our gourmet restaurant’s extensive wine cellar while one takes in a panoramic mountain view through three walls of glass.
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Sentence 6:Most new service representatives require more than three months of intensive training before they are ready to handle the position on there own.
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Sentence The legal files in the first floor storage area are usually not in order, they contain obsolete material that can lead us to produce inaccurate reports.
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Sentence Avoid cutting your grass too short on hot, sunny days, the lawn will quickly dry out and burn.
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Sentence 9:In fact, because gold is so soft, it must be mixed with harder metals to make crowns jewelry, and other decorations.
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Sentence 6:Vehicles spreading out when going fast and pack together when moving slowly.
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Sentence As you know, Montgomery is home to many artists and who volunteer their time to work at the Galena Arts Academy with the children as a part of the city-wide Volunteer Artists’ Program.
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Sentence 6:We begin the session and gave you guidance that will help you decide what kinds of jobs are suitable, given your current skills.
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Sentence Nestled in a wondrous mountain setting Twin Treasures offers magnificent suites, brick fireplaces, and balconies with breathtaking views.
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Sentence Medford have always been a safe, quiet town with very little traffic.
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Which revision would improve the effectiveness of paragraph D?
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Sentence 9:His paintings include many portraits, especially those of peasants and weavers.
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Sentence Unfortunately, what went up do not always come back down, with the result that Mount Everest has a major trash problem today.
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Sentence 10:If you have children or pets, one should arrange to have them looked after if you want to supervise the move yourself.
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Sentence Quick, convenient, reliable delivery service in the Louisville metropolitan area is know a reality!
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Sentence 1Do we want to loose our local shoe, clothing, and variety stores?
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Sentence Elena she has worked under my supervision as a service representative since February 20, 1998.
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Sentence After selecting a color, you should measure the room so that you buy the correct amount of paint, and then you are ready to begin.
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Sentence 1I can be reached at home (213) 239-8206 after 5:00 P.M., or you may leave a message on my answering machine or e-mail.
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Sentence 6:It will change the quality of life in Medford with the proposed shopping mall.
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Sentence Van Gogh, in his paintings, and beliefs, was a champion of the lower classes.
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Sentence Along with the tools needed to scale the mountain’s icy inclines, climbers also took with them bottles of various beverages, containers of food, oxygen tanks, and other items required to survive Everest’s challenge.
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Sentence 1As an employee, any organization would be proud to have someone like her.
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Sentence 9:Emergency teams have reported valuable information about CO levels, for example, one metropolitan area experienced a problem with CO levels that caused hundreds of alarms to go off during the first season they were available.
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Sentence 9:In spite of the initiatives of these organizations, there is still groups who are not willing to do their part.
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Sentence 1 Regular delivery service is $4.00, for any document or package weighing less than three pounds.
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Sentence By investing in just one weekend you will have the background knowledge that will give you lifelong skills.
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Sentences 1 and How can you reduce fuel consumption? The cost of gasoline is rising.
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Sentence Are you a handy person with the knowledge to do it yourself but you do not have the tools or equipment?
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Sentences 5 and 6:Leave the clippings in the grass.The need for fertilizers is reduced.
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Sentence Be sure to review these documents, file them away for safekeeping.
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Sentence 9:A flyer enclosed with the invoice states that your association will have received “a portion of the proceeds.”
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Sentence Our shipping policy guaranteeing that your trees will reach you in the best possible condition.
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